As joking about German words works incredibly well in English, here’s the original:

There you go. Now you can be sure that the joke’s just as funny as originally intended.

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      8 months ago

      Yeah I still don’t know what the word is because I couldn’t read it in any panel it appeared in (assuming it was the same word each time, I have no idea)

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      8 months ago

      I find it easy to read, but in terms of constructive feedback I would try to write the letters larger. As there’s a lot of whitespace in the speech bubbles, the text could be made quite a bit bigger without even needing bigger bubbles.

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        8 months ago

        Thanks for the feedback, I’ll work on that. Usually, the panels are meant to be looked at one by one, like a gallery that you swipe through or something, which would make the text bigger as well, but Lemmy doesn’t seem to support that, so it’s the full comic in one image, which may be part of that issue. But yeah, I’ll try to improve the text.

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      8 months ago

      I tend to tell myself that some day I’ll improve my handwriting, but I guess I’d just rather just demand gallery-style lemmy posts to increase the size of the panels instead because that requires much less work than actual self-improvement on my side.

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        I assume you are the artist. I actually like your art style, colors and characters. The issue is the lettering makes your comic less accessible. I think you are losing potential audience for what otherwise would be a fun comic.