• zabadoh
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    10 months ago

    We finally get to see what those two healers in the city are doing…

    And it looks just like green glowing hand magic, no matter if it’s a tummyache or a lacerated leg.

    Versatile stuff, this isekai healing magic is…

    As wsj018 said, there’s a grim foreshadowing at the end.

    The writing is as subtle as an anime girl’s hammer…

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      10 months ago

      Yeah, I think, compared to a lot of isekai out there, this one actually has well written characters for the most part. The friendships and motivations feel real and engaging. Then, there is the larger plot of the world they are in, which is so awfully generic that, if you zoom out even a little bit, sounds like every other isekai. I think just the synopsis turns a lot of people away because of that.

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        10 months ago

        I think the main problem is that so far the writing has been a little too straightforward.

        Like I said earlier, there’s nothing subtle about it: Everything is tell, tell, tell, leaving no mysteries about the characters or the setting for the viewer’s mind to fill in.